kia ora and welcome to my blog I was so ihiih which mens excited to share my writing with you so hear it is hope you enjoy!!
Please leave a comment! We have been doing descrions writing this is my example.What was your favorite part?
SEE
The joyful birthday boy is having his glamorous sixth birthday party.
The golden crown on his black licorice head.
The shiny mirror is reflecting on the magnificent birthday party. The books are colourful.
TASTE
The wobbly jelly is strawberry flavoured.
The delicious cake is strawberry flavoured for the icing and the whole cake is vanilla flavoured.
You can taste the pineapple juice squirting into your mouth and the dry cheese.
You could taste the mint flavoured donuts
SMELL
The teeny tiny triangle sandwiches smell like hundreds and thousands.
The flowers smell like plums. You can smell the sizzling sausages.
You can smell the dusty cardboard.
You could smell the violet flowers, they smell like plum cake.
kia ora and welcome to my blog I was so ihiih which mens excited to share my writing with you so hear it is hope you enjoy!!
Please leave a comment! We have been doing descrions writing this is my example.What was your favorite part?
SEE
The joyful birthday boy is having his glamorous sixth birthday party.
The golden crown on his black licorice head.
The shiny mirror is reflecting on the magnificent birthday party. The books are colourful.
TASTE
The wobbly jelly is strawberry flavoured.
The delicious cake is strawberry flavoured for the icing and the whole cake is vanilla flavoured.
You can taste the pineapple juice squirting into your mouth and the dry cheese.
You could taste the mint flavoured donuts
SMELL
The teeny tiny triangle sandwiches smell like hundreds and thousands.
The flowers smell like plums. You can smell the sizzling sausages.
You can smell the dusty cardboard.
You could smell the violet flowers, they smell like plum cake.
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