Greetings to you,today I am going to show and tell you about my work called the world of insects.It is learning about the live of an insect.We are doing this as part of my reading class. It is to think deeper into our learning.
It was complicating at some point of it,I have done most of it but I have still got a lot.When I was stuck on something I would stop and have a little think about it for a moment until I get it.
Now I would like to show you my work.
What have you been learning in your reading?
Share it on your blog and get feedback!
Hello Paige, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI loved your animation it was so cool how you told me a bit about the bug as well.
This reminds me of last year when my friend Olivia B did some work on beetles. She made her own type of beetle with a mermaid tail and other things.
To improve, you should not make the bird go skark skark for so long. Also you could make the animation more detailed, and maybe don't add all the slides to your blog.
What's your favourite insect?
Cya later Paige, keep it up!
-Amelia
Helo Amelia!
DeleteThx for commenting on my work!
mermaid tall things! :D
the feedback you gave me was so good if i make a nother one I will do that!
- Paige B