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Hi bloggers of the world!
I am going to show you my reading work today!! The reading we have been have done is called the last straw.
It is about pranking, but about going to far!!!
We have been reading text and working on slides!
My next step is probably to make some of this a bit better and tell more about this!
I think when it got hard was when I have to think really hard about it and find more info....
Pranking is fun and you can have a good laugh, but sometimes it can turn into bullying. And that is not good for anyone.
This is one of my slides!!
Hoped you liked it goodbye oh and what have you been doing for reading??
Hello Paige my bestie, It's me, Amelia!
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have shown a cool picture of what you made, it seems a bit scary in that room don't you think? I like how you explained what you have been learning about and why you drew that picture as well.
This reminds me of when my friend Olivia designed a beetle for reading work and it had a mermaid tail and wings and other crazy stuff. (I know, its totally random but its the first thing I thought of on this post!)
To improve, maybe you could add a slide with the picture on it or maybe a bit more about your reading work or a funny goodbye gif at the end. (Don't forget to put the gif's link in!)
Why did you think to make this blog post?
What was your favourite part in the book?
Cya later Paige, keep it up!
-Amelia
Hello amelia, my also bestie! Its me Paige!!
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog post!
I loved this comment because it is kind and it has good feedback!
I made this blog post because we were blogging about our work and I wanted to blog about my reading.
My favorite part in the book (We read a text on paper just so you know) was when michael was planning his revenge like my teacher it is her favorite bit as well.
What is you favorite book at the moment?(I know what is is...)
- Paige B